Over the course of 13 months we can see a
clear difference between the language use by Z and a number of theories could
be used to explain this development. In the first transcript (drawing a
banana), Z has a mean length utterance of around 5 morphemes. This suggests he
is in the later multimorpheme stage of development that involves utterances
forming based on local topics and items within close proximity to them. This is
displayed in the transcript many times as Z talks about his ‘little pad’ as
well as what ‘Daddy’ has for dinner. The conversation between H and Z takes on
a question and answer approach, mainly focused on closed questions that evoke
short answers such as ‘what have you eaten today?’ ‘bananas’. Open questions
rarely feature throughout the transcript as Z is carrying out an activity and
therefore interrogatives from H are based on that activity. For example: ‘you
think it goes there?’, ‘where is your little pad?’. This will impact Z’s mean
length of utterance as the typical response to a closed question is between 2
and 4 morphemes. Therefore, based on the context of the transcript, Z’s
language use is limited and not every aspect of his linguistic ability have
been given an opportunity to be displayed.
In the second transcript, which is 13 months
on, the mean length of utterance is 6.3. This indicates a development but due
to the structural features of what Z says, he doesn’t move out of the later
multimorpheme stage. This transcript is full of longer utterances giving a
commentary on what Z is doing, however many false starts occur and the
utterances are more of a stream of consciousness rather than fully calculated
and functioning sentences. For example: Z says ‘an I’m sitting here (.) to (.)
for waiting (.) to get (0.5) better (.) for it (0.5)’ and although we
understand what Z means as we have background knowledge of the context, this
sentence is very disjointed and not fully operative. In spite of this, Z is
unwell and most likely distracted from his train of thought and this reflects
in his speech. In terms of lexis, Z uses non-standard language throughout the
text. In reference to the cardboard robot he is building, Z says ‘it got lots
of hurt all the way down’. The use of the word ‘hurt’ in replacement of a word
for ‘injuries’ is again a common trait used by children; which is typically
evolved from when they’ve learned what it means to hurt themselves and then
they over generalise this rule and use it as an adjective. This
overgeneralisation could be explained by Chomsky’s language acquisition device
(LAD). Chomsky said that children are hard-wired with a perception of syntax
and word order and that they learn language rules via watching others talk.
This explains mistakes such as adding the suffix –ed to all verbs although it
isn’t always correct. (Eg: ‘walk’ becomes ‘walked’, but ‘run’ becomes ‘ran’ and
not ‘runned’. According to Chomsky, Z has developed an understanding for the
use of the dynamic verb hurt based on the way the verb cut can be used as an
adjective.
The grammatical content of all the utterances
in each transcript is mainly correct with some pronunciation issues. The
phoneme ‘th’ (θ
– the voiceless dental fricative) is incorrectly pronounced by Z ‘frough’
instead of ‘through’ and ‘fings’ instead of ‘things’. This is a commonly made
mistake by children up to the age of 8 years old and the voiced and voiceless
dental fricatives are typically the last phoneme learnt. This error is
corrected through modelling and support from the parent. This is evident in the
transcript as H repeats what Z has just said but in the correct way, in an
attempt to reinforce the correct pronunciation. This supports Lev Vygotsky’s
theory the ‘zone of proximal development’. Vygotsky views interaction with able
people as the best way to aid learning. The modelling shown in the transcript
displays this perfectly as whenever Z is struggling with a word or phrasing, H
repeats it back to him the right way and she only does this when there’s an
issue. This method is very effective as it gives the learner help when they
seek it and doesn’t spoon feed them too much. In the second transcript, the
support (or scaffolding) is required a lot more but not it isn’t used in the
same way. Modelling features a lot less in the robot transcript and instead H
guides what Z is saying by paraphrasing and then asking ‘is that what you’re
saying?’ or ‘it’s gotta take some time to heal, has it?’. This method pushes
the conversation along and gives encouragement but doesn’t provide a direct
correction for Z to learn from meaning he may not be benefitting or learning
much about language from this technique.
According
to Piaget, children between the ages of 1 and 6 years old are in the
preoperational stage of development and rely on role play to learn as they
haven’t developed a logical mind yet. Z adheres to this rule as the whole of
the second transcript is a role play/game and the language featured in it
supports this. Throughout the text, Z uses declaratives to inform H of what he
wants to do and how the ‘robot’ is doing. This is typical of a child at this
stage according to Piaget as they haven’t developed an understanding of how
things look from another person’s point of view and so Z feels the need to
explain everything he is doing. The repetition and emphasis of ‘wait an wait an
wait’ is also evidence for Z being in this stage as he feels the need to
exaggerate what he is talking about so that others understand. It’s unlikely
that Z – at his age – would be able to use repetition as a rhetorical device as
this is very complex and beyond the multimorpheme stage. This idea of
egocentrism is applicable to child cognition and thus it impacts on the child’s
language choices.
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ReplyDeleteSorry I forgot that this was the original that I asked you to post. Here is the origninal feedbak I gave for reference:
ReplyDeleteYou have a lovely, academic style that will serve you really well and you are discussing theories in a very precise way that will allow you to develop your evaluation of them as you practise this.
I would like you to look at your interpretations of a few things again. You have a lovely, developed paragraph on Chomsky (don't be afraid to contrast the theories of others in the same paragraph as this is vital for the A) but you use an example of overextension ("hurt" is being used as a noun instead of a verb as you rightly say, but that is not overgeneralisation of a grammatical rule, it is taking a meaning and overextending it in a way that is non-standard, which is, of course, how much slang develops and shows an awareness that words often are able to traverse word classes -we will be calling this conversion when we do language change - can you think of a couple of examples?) to support your comments on overgeneralisation. I think you could (should) argue that his conversion of "hurt" is a LAD characteristic but it would need to be tentative (and that is something to ensure you do for the A - tentativity about what and why and what it could relate to).
Can you quantify that most of the questions are closed? Try and support your assertions and use that opportunity to show your thoughtful consideration of some questions being hard to categorise but how they link to certain theories/concepts if considered one way or another.
I would look at the increased level of complexity evident in "I'm sitting here... waiting to get better (.) for it" and the non-fluency of many adult utterances, particularly when they are occupied in a task - that is complex syntax to handle.
Try to use word classes rather than "word". "Hurt" can be an adjective e.g. 'I am hurt', as well as a verb but it is non-standard as a noun, which is how it is being used in Z's utterance.
"Frough" rather than 'through' is not a mistake, it is an immature (or maybe accent-related) pronunciation , so I may be modelling but perhaps not as a correction because I don't expect him to be able to articulate it with mature pronunciation - I may just be echoing for the purposes of positive reinforcement. Talk about the development of articulatory muscles and the 'fis phenomenon'.
Is modelling used when children "seek help"? Differentiate between modelling and recasting/reformulation. I would argue that "is that what you are saying" after a reformulation is much more of an intervention than just echoing with a standard pronunciation, which doesn't draw attention to the non-standard usage and therefore it is likely not to be perceived. Much more terminology needed - really look for opportunities to cram it in.
Why would he feel the need to explain if he didn't perceive that I have a different agenda from him? There are clear, and sophisticated, attempts at persuasion and regulatory utterances - these are worth exploring.
There is plenty that is really good here - just a few natural misunderstandings at this stage.
Then this is useful too:
ReplyDeleteCheck overgeneralisation vs over-extension and you used adjective when you meant a different word class - 'cut' can be a verb or a ..?
Dismissing Zach's complex utterance as disjointed stops you from analysing how he is moving towards the post-telegraphic stage - look at how the utterance has all the elements of a full adult utterance 'and I'm sitting here waiting for it to get better' and has a high degree of sophistication in terms of not only how meaning is layered into it but also in its persuasive function in context.
Try and connect and contrast ideas from theory in each paragraph and link to theory and context for every quote you analyse.
Use inverted commas around words or phrases that are appropriate but from a different register e.g. 'spoon feed' to show an awareness that it is a register shift.
Good tentativity in places - try and offer alternate explanations where there is ambiguity.